Congratulations, Yellow Group!

You are officially published authors! Each of you has used your reading, writing, and critical thinking skills to write a five-paragraph essay on an important social issue. By writing about endangered elephants, you are educating other people about the importance of this issue. We must hope that by educating other individuals, we can join together to fight the many injustices suffered by elephants. Thank you for your hard work and consistent enthusiasm. -Ms. B

Wednesday, March 14, 2007

Kamari

Kamari

I am going to tell you some facts that I know about elephants. My paper is going to be about endangered elephants, why they are endangered and ways to help them. If you would like to help endangered elephants all you have to do is read this paper and find out. I know that elephants are mammals and that they are warm-blooded. If two male elephants start a fight, they use their trunks to fight.
The most important thing about elephants is they are endangered. They are endangered because of habitat loss, ivory poaching and working. They are also endangered because people have wars in their habitats. They are also endangered because they get sold to the circus and get whipped.
I would help endangered elephants by calling the people who want elephants to be safe and tell them they are dying. I would tell them they are dying because of ivory poaching, habitat los and because of war. I would also help elephants by trying to stop people who I see poaching.
That is everything I know about endangered elephants. If you would like to help elephants, go to our website. I wrote this to encourage people to help elephants. I don’t think elephants should be treated like this because elephants did not do anything to people. I don’t think this is fair because elephants are loving and caring creatures. I think this madness should stop.