Social issues are problems that affect the whole group. Now I will tell you a social issue. I’m reading a book called Endangered Elephants. I am going to tell you facts about elephants.
Let me tell you about elephants. Elephants dig for salt to stay healthy. Elephants are the biggest animal in the jungle. Elephants, as you know, are mammals and are warm blooded. . Since I told you facts, now I would like to tell you more about elephants. Read on!
Now let me tell you why elephants are endangered. The two reasons are ivory poaching and people trading ivory to wear as jewelry. Those are two reasons why elephants are endangered. Now let me tell you ways to help elephants. There are two ways to help elephants. One ways is to tell people not to poach elephants. The second way is to put elephants in a bigger society. By this, I mean their habitats are getting destroyed.
Now I told facts about elephants, I told you why elephants are endangered, and I told ways to help them to. I really hope you take action this problem. I don’t want other kids growing up and saying that elephants where just fake .I want to say that elephants were peaceful animals until people came and started to poach them and sell their tusk’s for money and this is not fair to the public, nature and the elephants. In my belief I think elephants should not get all this madness.
It is not good to use elephants to do things that are dangerous. Some people start to whip the elephants for moving slow. I am going to say elephants carry a lot of fat so you can’t make them go any faster then the speed there going. Thank you for your time. I hope you care and help save the elephants.
Congratulations, Yellow Group!
You are officially published authors! Each of you has used your reading, writing, and critical thinking skills to write a five-paragraph essay on an important social issue. By writing about endangered elephants, you are educating other people about the importance of this issue. We must hope that by educating other individuals, we can join together to fight the many injustices suffered by elephants. Thank you for your hard work and consistent enthusiasm.
-Ms. B

Thursday, March 15, 2007
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7 comments:
Bruno, your essay made me want to read on and take action, just like you suggested! Thanks- Miss Matos
I like both the way you wrote this essay and what you have to say about elephants. You make it clear that there is a serious problem - I will try to find out more about this. Thanks!
Renee Rastorfer
Reading this cleverly constructed essay has tought me so much about elephants. You do a great job at keeping your reader interested! I now know so much more about elephants! Good job!
Anthony,
Your essay have a very "take action" tone to it. It makes me want to start helping the plight of animals right away! Do you know of any good websites I could visit to help me help the elephants? Great job, Bruno. Thanks!
--Mr. de Leon
Anthony, your essay is so interesting and fun to read! Each paragraph has a well thought-out purpose, it is clear you have thought about this issue a lot. Also, I didn't know that elephans dig for salt! Thank you for writing about this important topic.
Anthony,
Bravo sir. This is a fantsatic essay. Great essays inform the reader and after reading what you have written I definitely feel more informed. I thought I knew a lot about elephants but now I know I have a lot more to learn. I knew they were in trouble but now I have know what I can do to help.
Keep up the good work.
Mr. Sawicki
great job ant
rod champ burfod
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