Nathaniel
A social issue is an issue that has an effect on a large number of people. The social issue I will be discussing is endangered elephants. Before I started reading this book, I thought that elephants were just regular, free animals. But after I read this book I started to understand that elephants are very badly endangered. I have learned a lot about elephants throughout this unit on endangered elephants. I will tell you some facts about elephants, problems, and possible solutions to solve those problems.
I know many interesting facts about elephants for instance, I know that elephants are herbivores. Elephants have prehensile ( something able to move things) trunks. Elephants that come from Asia usually do not have tusks . Do you know that elephants are beginning to charge at people for destroying their habitats? Elephants have huge ears that they can fan when they are tired and hot .Elephants have not been able to find food since people started ruining their habitats . Most importantly they are endangered animals.
There are many reasons why elephants are endangered. Habitat loss, ivory poaching, killed during wars, and working elephants. But ivory poaching and working elephants are main causes. Elephants get poached for ivory that makes jewelry and art. Elephants also get taken away from herds to work for Asians and Africans.
There are many things you can do to help elephants. A couple of solutions I have are, to vote on all places to be off-limits to hunters. Another three solutions are to convince zoos to make more places for captivity and, people shouldn’t have elephants work for them. You could easily make your own website, to help endangered elephants also.
Even though elephants aren’t humans, they still have feelings. People should respect them. You would go into other farmers food if you didn’t have any either. So I’d appreciate it if you helped elephants, they would too. Thank-you.
Congratulations, Yellow Group!
You are officially published authors! Each of you has used your reading, writing, and critical thinking skills to write a five-paragraph essay on an important social issue. By writing about endangered elephants, you are educating other people about the importance of this issue. We must hope that by educating other individuals, we can join together to fight the many injustices suffered by elephants. Thank you for your hard work and consistent enthusiasm.
-Ms. B

Friday, March 16, 2007
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Nathaniel, your essay is very informative. I will tells other how to help elephants. Thanks for the tips! -Miss Matos
This reads like a 5th Grade essay!
Nathaniel, I really enjoyed reading your essay about elephants as an endangered species. I had heard this but didn't know the many ways that it is happening. I also didn't know that they were herbivores.Thanks for the ideas on what we can do to improve things for the elephants. I will tell people not to buy ivory jewelry and to support any campaigns to save the elephants. thanks, Eva Nilsen
Nathaniel,
The reason your essay is so impressive is because you have a topic sentence for each paragraph that really sets up what I'm about to learn. It definately keeps me interested. Do you have any ideas for how I can help the plight of the elephants? I would like to help. Thanks!
--Mr. de Leon
Nathaniel,
Thank you for caring about our elephants. With you and your scholars taking an interest in this issue I now how faith that things will change. I knew about the issues but after reading your paper I now know what we can do to make a difference.
Sincerely,
Mr. Sawicki
Nathaniel, this is an excellent essay! You did a great job explaining the problems that face elephants, and I particularly like your solutions. Do you have any ideas about how to convince people not to use elephants and workers?You're right, we need to respect elephants the way we would respect other humans. Great work!
Nathaniel's Aunt said...
I enjoyed your article very much. You are very insiteful at nine years old. I look forward to reading more publishings by you!
Markese said....
I like your drawing of the elephant by the tree. I am inspired to help elephants too!
Auntie Nat
Nathaniel, I am so proud of you. They say children are our future and I am proud to know you will be part of it. I found your article to be quite educational, I even learned a new word. "Prehensile", I always thought an elephants trunk was just called a trunk. I hope you and your group will continue to publish informative information and I loved the art work.
Anthony 6
Nay, your picture is so nice, so so nice, keep making your pictures. I think they are the best. Good job I read your story and I think we should help the elephants too.
Uncle Mike
I read your article and I was impressed with the content and art work. I look forward to learning more and reading your future articles. Keep up the good work
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